Volcano Narrative hook

This week for writing we have to write a new hook for a story. I had to hook my readers so that they enjoy my story . The hook I used was a sound effect.

Crack! Boom! Boom! kapow!!!!!! The scary volcano was sad because he had diarrhea from his friend. So the other volcano that was next to the volcano that had diarrhea is a doctor and she thought to put a big rock on its head.