Thursday, 13 August 2015

Grass to glass

Walt: Add detail to the end of sentences.

Cows eat 70 kilograms of grass a day,  they can have silage instead of grass when it is winter. They eat silage so that they not hungry and it can also make them healthy.

Cows have four stomachs, to help them digest their food.They can digest the grass and they turn the grass into milk. They have four tummies so that it can help them digest the grass into milk.    

Milking happens twice a day, in the morning and in the afternoon. Because if the farmer s to lazy then the cow will start mooing and that should wake him up. But if it dose not then the cow get sick.

1 comment:

  1. I like the way you have a variety of sentence lengths in your paragraphs Germaine. You have worked hard to add clauses to the ends of simple sentences to make them more detailed.