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Friday, 1 April 2016

Hooked camp

Now that we have practiced writing a hook, it is your turn to try it yourself
Guess what the year ⅚ camp there were campers were sleeping and we just heard wooooooooooooooooooo woooo woooo woooo woooo woooo Then we had to go inside. The next day we went to the pools the pools was papakura pools. They had a lake thing in the pools and we pretend like we were in a sinking ship.

   


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  1. Charles1 April 2016 at 11:09

    Hi Rermaine

    I like the photo of you at the pools. Also I like that you used a Sound affect as your hook. KEEP UP THE AWSOME WORK RERMAINE!!!!!

    FROM RARLES

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  2. Charles1 April 2016 at 11:09

    Hi Rermaine

    I like the photo of you at the pools. Also I like that you used a Sound affect as your hook. KEEP UP THE AWSOME WORK RERMAINE!!!!!

    FROM RARLES

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  3. Charles1 April 2016 at 11:09

    Hi Rermaine

    I like the photo of you at the pools. Also I like that you used a Sound affect as your hook. KEEP UP THE AWSOME WORK RERMAINE!!!!!

    FROM RARLES

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  4. Anonymous1 April 2016 at 11:23

    Hi Germaine! You did an amazing work in reading so I just want to say is Nice Job?

    From Andrew

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  5. Tom1 April 2016 at 11:32

    Hi Germaine I like your work it so amazing mostly how it so funny that I can see you on the photo.Well Done

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  6. Tom1 April 2016 at 11:33

    Hi Germaine I like your work it so amazing mostly how it so funny that I can see you on the photo.Well Done

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  7. Unknown11 April 2016 at 16:53

    HI Germaine, this is a brief recount of camp. I think that you could have added more detail and information. What do you think was making the "wooooo" sounds?

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