Volcano Narrative hook

This week for writing we have to write a new hook for a story. I had to hook my readers so that they enjoy my story . The hook I used was a sound effect.

Crack! Boom! Boom! kapow!!!!!! The scary volcano was sad because he had diarrhea from his friend. So the other volcano that was next to the volcano that had diarrhea is a doctor and she thought to put a big rock on its head.

        

Capitalisation

Walt: use punctuation accurately

1. ben and i are going to the movies.

Ben and I are going to the movies.

2. yesterday, i went to pt. england beach.

       Yesterday I went to Pt. England beach

3. tuesday is the duffy assembly.

       Tuesday is the Duffy assembly

4. have you seen the movie three wise cousins?

        Have you seen the movie three wise cousins

5. mr. burt is the principal of our school.

        Mr.Burt is the principal of our school

6. did you know that miss west likes to sing?

        Did you know that Miss West likes to sing?

7. mrs. moala was born in the united states of america.

        Mrs.Moala was born in the United States of America

8. mr. sommerville and miss lavakula both enjoy coaching sports.

        Mr.Sommerville and Miss Lavakula both enjoy coaching sports.

hooking your audience

Walt: hook our audience.

Term 1, Week 2: Capitalisation

 Walt: use punctuation accurately

1. ben and i are going to the movies.

Ben and I are going to the movies.

2. yesterday, i went to pt. england beach.

       Yesterday I went to Pt. England beach

3. tuesday is the duffy assembly.

       Tuesday is the Duffy assembly

4. have you seen the movie three wise cousins?

        Have you seen the movie three wise cousins

5. mr. burt is the principal of our school.

        Mr.Burt is the principal of our school

6. did you know that miss west likes to sing?

        Did you know that Miss West likes to sing?

7. mrs. moala was born in the united states of america.

        Mrs.Moala was born in the United States of America

8. mr. sommerville and miss lavakula both enjoy coaching sports.

        Mr.Sommerville and Miss Lavakula both enjoy coaching sports.

taupo

this my tuapo poster

Rarotonga

this is my mount smart poster

duffy

On tuesday we went to the duffy show and duffy was living next to a caravan cause duffy moved into a new neighborhood. The night duffy was going to sleep the next door neighbor was playing loud music and him and his mum went to ask if they can turn the music down. she came out and she said hi and duffy's mum said hi my son duffy is trying to sleep. She asked if she can turn the music down and then she went to turn the music down and she said by The way my name is ruby and duffy said hi my name is duffy.  Then they said good bye. The next day duffy went to ruby's house and showed us in her house and then days later duffy asked if she reads. She said never and the duffy said well why can't you read she say’s i never been to school. Then he showed us his time machine because he was going back in time to make ruby read. And then he went far back to 1981 and then he meet a ninja and the ninja taught Duffy how to fight. Then he went forward in time and then he saw ruby’s dad and then told ruby's dad was standing then duffy said come to me you're going to die just come and then duffy pulled ruby’s dad. Then someone throwed a flas bang and then they were in slow motion. And then ruby’s dad was alive and then ruby could read                  
                     

miri raru

Walt: make inferences about the character in a text.


this is my car for my miri raru

Happy new year

Walt: understand character reactions in a story.

hope you guys had a happy new year

jack jack attack

Walt: identify the key features of a narrative text.

this is a story about jack jack and the babysitter. the babysitter plays songs and then the jack jack use his powers to have fun with the babysitter

mt eden

Walt: make connections across texts

this is my mount Eden poster 

mike's new car

                                 Walt: identify the key features of a narrative text.
                                 Walt: use was/were correctly in our writing.